Torn

about my best friend and how we have been forcefully split apart by parents.

So shocked.

I have lost.

Everyone that meant the most to me.

Out of breathe.

Cant catch.

The memmories I have lost.

I am torn.

No glue to put me back together.

I miss you.

I want to.

Create days I wont forget.

No one to blame.

Except myself.

These people have torn us worlds apart.

No warning.

No mourning.

It was took away before I could blink.

My biggest fear.

You leaving.

No time to fix things anymore.

I miss you

I wanted to

These people have torn us worlds apart.

Reviews

[Kyle]

Awesome poem, it was full of emotion. I could feel the pull of it from here. And it explains what a lot of people go through, having to split up there friendship by parents or others. It is sad. And even though this poem was sad, I still enjoyed it. Nice work! ^-^

[Vaishali..^_^]

aww..!!! It's was beautiful..:)
thanks for sharing..^_^

[Kelley]

Quite the salt in the wound poem.
I love it!!!

[Katie L]

powerful, i like it and well written

[An owl on the moon]

So powerful and so deeply sad. The longing for the one who is your closest friend... now taken away. You communicate with a depth of emotion and desire for what was... painfully tragic...