Whats wrong with me?

Whats wrong with me?

A Poem by We are young.

Why cant you Telll me everything.

Like I tell you.

Why cant I be first for once?

I know its selfish...

But why cant you see me for me?

Why do I have to try so hard?

Only to be walked on in the end.

Why do I let you stomp on my pride?

Leave me behind?

I'm tired of this stress.

It's not even fair...

You'll lie

and cheat.

Tell me Im weak.

hurt me only to watch me bleed.

I hate fighting.

but sometimes I have to tell you off.

I'm tired of being forgot.

I mean really

Whats so wrong with me?

That you cant even trust me.

or tell me anything

Whats so wrong with me?

That I have average feelings.

Of jealousy

Of rage

or sadness

or hate.

Whats so wrong with me?

Is it because I care so much?

 

 

 

© 2009 We are young.


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Your writing is so powerful and you capture these feelings and share them perfectly.. I've been in situations like this, and could sense the emotion in myself as I read your words. So amazing.

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Added on November 18, 2009

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I'm not going to same I'm not average, Because I am. I dance in the rain and make sick jokes. I'm not a person who speaks out or who states her opinion. I can be the calmest person when i want to, or .. more..

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