Fine

exspressing ONE SIDE of my mind... though my mind only thinks this at times i wanted to exspress it.

I tried so hard.

But fine.

I guess my reasoning.

Was just a crime.

I care so much.

But fine.

Iv'e given up.

This hope of mine.

It's killing me.

But fine.

Just betray.

Cuz your that kind.

Reviews

[ebur™]

simple, but strong. I even like that little phrase - 'but fine.' great piece. :)

[An owl on the moon]

Such a brilliant glimpse of thoughts and feelings, the pain often hidden away. You express this so well.

[Jess.]

I like this alot..... =)

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

o_O
What or who is it based on?.
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