A Rose...

A symbolic poem. tell me how I did, its my first try at this.

A rose...

So beautiful.

So flawless.

From the apperance you think...

Perfect in every way.

A Rose.

Taken from its home.

Completley out of it's comfort zone.

A Rose.

Dies slowly but surley.

Rotting from the inside

 util it finally reaches the outside,

A Rose,

Crumbles to the ground.

Finished.

Petals rot.

Yet this Rose.

Will never be forgot.

 

Reviews

[Edalene Connell]

What a beautiful poem.

[An owl on the moon]

You write so vividly, sharing the beauty and the life that this rose symbolizes. So wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing!

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautifully written. It was so sweet and the flow was smooth. Very well done.

[holyspirit1]

cute i like it good job