Homesick

In your arms I feel so safe.

Like a dream I don't wont to awake.

The sound of your heartbeat.

The feel of your bare feet.

I hate it when I am not around you.

It breaks my heart to leave just for a day from you.

When your not here I feel so homesick.

Like I don't belong.

No one understands these feelings.

There way too strong.

I can't exsplain it.

but without you I feel wrong.

So wrap your arms around me just one more time.

And laugh with me in perfect rhyme.

Hold my hand and hold it tight.

And let me hear your heart  tonight.

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Everything about this piece is simply wonderful. The flow, the imagery, the feeling... it captures so well that feeling of loss when you're away from the one you love. Homesick... so perfect!

[Alex]

That was very nice. ^_^
I thought it flowed well and seemed to rhyme naturally and pleasantly.
Well done.