This was the end

 

Hiding alone, depressed never shown.

Lying in the blood that was self inflicted, no regrets her fate has been written. She wanted it painful, slow. Savoring her last breath for the words that muttered I love you so. A picture of him lies on the table next to her hand, and on her finger lies her wedding band. All alone, why was she still here? Why had she not thought of this long ago. Surely she was a mess after he had passed on. Her fingers slipped on the table covered in blood. She clutched the picture once again, and sighed, because finally.

This was then end.

Reviews

[mae-mae<3]

A few grammer and spelling issues. But this was perfect. You might want to separate each line in the form of a poem. Unless this is the way you intended it, in it's own little uniqueness. Wonderful. Powerful. A few words can say so much.

[Jinx's Heart]

Gosh, this is such an emotional poem. It discretely shows how loud despair and pain can be without anyone knowing or realizing it. Awesome work. :)