death is all I fell

Its short I know

Pain is never real. Death is all I feel.
Sometimes I fall.
Is it worth it all?
Love has a cost.
Thats why I had lost.
Sometimes I feel like it could never be the same.
That I will lay here, and die as I soak in my shame

Author's Note

Its short, but I don't care, I still like to write about depressive things. But in real life im not depressive.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Brilliant, such depth in this darkness... I have felt dead at times (in the past) and your words pain that emotional darkness so well... I am glad these feelings are not your own!

[poetic-raven2012]

I like this-the rhyming couplets add to it somehow...hmm.
Oh, and I think you meant to put "feel" in your title, but you put "fell."
The last two lines are my favorite =)

[None]

I was captured by your words, especially "soak in my shame." You have a gift with depressive writing and I'm happy to hear you aren't depressed in real life. You have the edge on the emotions here and it's great.