Secret

I know a secret and I just can't keep the words 

How I long to whisper like a feather on your curves  

Comes an autumn breeze so soft into your ear 

On this summer night I wish that you could hear  

Feelings deep inside, words waiting  to convey 

A secret to be told, the words I want to say 

Reviews

[r. f. jordan]

this is a cool and drafty piece, in how the language involved resembles the subject matter covered. each word a leaf whispering in the wind of the speaker. nice work.

[Doxophobia]

So straightforward and sleek. I feel like it mixes inner feelings with touching romance.
Simply gorgeous.

[Lily Mae]

Oh, I love this.. to whisper like a feather on your curves is so sexy and romantic.. :)

[khalid]

very nicely written. i have enjoyed reading it

[marytownsend]

Beautiful poem, very well written!

beuatiful touching piece