Angel

Angel

A Poem by Miu
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A true angel

"

A cry of pain was heard

Also a gunshot

She lays on the ground

Dying at the feet

Of the one she loved the most

His eyes wide with shock

He had almost been killed

She took his place

Her heart stopped

Her body went limp

A true angel

Even soaked in her own blood

© 2011 Miu


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Lovely poem, showing that love is enough for even an angel to replace the one she loved.
I think this quite excellent, and your very good ^_^

wonderful descriptions, but I think some of it doesn't flow very well.

~Critique because I love~

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem. I really like how you lay out the whole scene of what's going on while still telling the story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Miu
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Im a quiet person who has emotional problems. I'm trying my hardest to hang on to what i know. Other than all of that creepy dark stuff, i love to write, read, draw, hang with my colorguard family (t.. more..

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