Gone

Gone

A Poem by Miu

He runs away

From it all

Screaming while crawling away

From the terrible things

That live inside that house

Being chased

His grave already dug

Just waiting for the corpse

For the soul to be gone

He cant run anymore

Cornered by the beasts

Of the night

Blood flowed from the fresh corpse

A soul Gone

© 2011 Miu


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Paris,

Screaming, running, crawling, beasts, souls and blood... all the makings of a horror flick. What scares us the most? Privacy invaded, I think. You just invaded our private thoughts with the voice of haunting.

A bit of polish and I would think about adding this to the contest Dark Secrets... on Poetic Infusion Society.

Have a great day,

Legacy

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, dark and creepy. Cool

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh! Scary! A nice dark one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 19, 2011
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Miu
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Im a quiet person who has emotional problems. I'm trying my hardest to hang on to what i know. Other than all of that creepy dark stuff, i love to write, read, draw, hang with my colorguard family (t.. more..

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