lionheart

rising above, it does matter

I see those creatures moving along me

i wish others could see what i can see

That we wont run we wont run

but can only hold the gun

It's a forest where they disappear

a sea that is painted black here

and howling ghosts they reappear here

now i am of the nature breathing in wild temperature

am changed and others beware

as high i'll fly as eagle hovering over showing danger

like a bat i'll suck your blood

all will you be left bitten in pain

dare you have trouble with me

i'll be a cat as omen to crush your glee ,alone

i'll be with myself all through life alone

singing like a cuckoo making people to drown

i my words

to my friends i'll be dog

faithful and loyal and adorable as pup

serving as man's best friend

cause i am a legend

bestis we r crazy like monkeys

b*****s around seem pretty donkeys

life about to going quack back

nobody knows when it snaps whack

You maybe the master of your world

but i am free bird and a free lance

wandering around making my own plans

You're your world's king , but i am a lion-heart

A lionheart.

Author's Note

please do tell me what do you all think? :)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"to my friends i'll be dog

faithful and loyal and adorable as pup

serving as man's best friend

cause i am a legend"




bestis we r crazy like monkeys

b*****s around seem pretty donkeys

[paras]

lol these lines just came up in my mind but now they seem with deep meanings X) :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)....................

[R.F.]

An interesting and original piece. Well written.

[paras]

thanks .! am glad you liked it .!! :)

[Khushi]

Very well written. i especially like these lines
You maybe the master of your world
but i am free bird and a free lance
wandering around making my own plans

Thanks for sharing.

[paras]

pleasure , am glad you liked it :)

[Bri]

It's a forest where they disappear
a sea that is painted black here
and howling ghosts they reappear here

I love this stanza. You've given me the chills. This entire poem is awesome. You've done excellent. Keep it up.

[paras]

thanks alot.!!:)

[Radhika]

great piece ...inspires one to lead life with own will ,without caring a damn of the world!
keep up the good work !

[paras]

thanks a lot .!! : ) i appreciate your time

[Penny]

It sounds like an oath. Something I would imagime myself when the transition between school and college life came. Structure and title are unique. Keep writing like this.

[paras]

thanks :) surely poetry do revive memories :)

[Penny]

It really does, especially if it so heartfelt.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...:)..................

[paras]

thanks.! am glad you liked it.!:)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome..:)