Cage of glass

everyone is caught up in something. aren't they?

Till now , the world seemed real to me

 eventually it turned out not so be

i found i live in a universe which is fake

people , feelings , theories and the thoughts they make

the projections on glass

i thought 'em to be real

but i was lying to myself

there's nothing that's real , all i get for me is betrayal

False hope i accepted 

false dreams i fated

but what do i get from them ?

fake people came for me

said it was by my destiny.

but i am the captain of my life

and the swordsman of my soul , seeking my goal

those fake relationships were more of battleships

the friends i got my feelings they never bought

this is real ,this is me

am exactly where am supposed to be now

gonna let the light shine on me

now i found who i am, there's no way to hold it in

no more hiding who i wanna be

this is me!

in this castle of glass, there lies a mirror

the one we all know who is dearer

years pass through but it'll talk to me

my reflection it'll always be

do you know what its like?

to feel so in the dark 

its a dream that got alive

when you're the shining star

even though it seems, like its too far away

but i have to believe in myself and its the only way

o mirror in glass! you're the voice i hear inside my head

the reason i am living

you're the missing piece i need

for the complete picture of me

cause you mirror my mother 

you'are the only crack in this cage of glass

hardly there anything for you to see

but you still do it for me

i wanna have a revenge for falseness

the people who gave me a mess

but after atlast

i am caught in this 'Cage Of Glass' 

Reviews

[Shirlena]

It feels good to get the things that weigh so heavily off of our chest. We can almost float away afterwards and poetry is the best in offering us this type of release. You emote well.

[paras]

thanks alot :) i appreciate you spent your time on my work :)

[Penny]

This poem is flawless. Its complete. Its like reading a work of a great author. Thanks for sharing.

[paras]

thanks alott.!! thanks for your time and finding my poem interesting.!!:) means a lot to me

[Penny]

Its totally my pleasure. And when you are reading poems like this, time ceases.

[Miles W.]

Very interesting. Definitely shows the power of thoughts coming together with the real world to create something surreal.

[paras]

thanks alot .!! am glad you find my poem interesting ^^

[prodicallife]

Dear Paras,

You are really good with your thoughts. You justify them.

A very good selection of words and very good framing of thoughts.

Would you mind if I point at one almost negligible mistake maybe that could have been a typo mistake.

"i found a live in a universe which is fake
people , feelings , theories and thoughts they make
"
You wrote live, it should have been life.

Let me know if I got it wrong.

Thanks
stay blessed
Prodical

[paras]

prodical,
really really thanks and i appreciate that you read the poem so precisely
and the line is actually i found i live in a universe which is fake.
i'll correct it
thanks and am glad :)

[prodicallife]

I am much appreciated with it.

regards
Prodical

[Praveeta]

Loved the following:

"this is real ,this is me
am exactly where am supposed to be now
gonna let the light shine on me
now i found who i am, there's no way to hold it in
no more hiding who i wanna be
this is me!"

[paras]

thanks a lot for you time and interest.!!:) means great to me

[Sami Khalil]

"o mirror in glass! you're the voice i hear inside my head
the reason i am living

you're the missing piece i need
for the complete picture of me"

Those lines stood out for me in this splendid poem...Pen on...:)........

[paras]

thanks alot..!! m glad you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)......................