Painting my life

fill your canvas with the colours

I came to this world and opened my eyes

nobody knew all were in their own hives

to god gave me a plane to paint

A space to fill a sketch to be done

all should be done  by me cause i am the one

its written in my destiny they say

to love to play and to pray

But my life will go on the way i want 

not the other's stupid rules- do's and don'ts 

my fortune is no ones to see , my death or glee

Am the artist i choose the outlines

what would i become where i am go

to the places that nobody saw

but trust me am not a raw

i know the world what pity shall i spit

money-minders all self interested

but i'll be for my own go on and on

pursuing my way till the dawn

i have my colors and my brush

i dont give a s**t that ya all after the rush

till the spring till the fall

i'll rise up to y'all

i got a golden gun and a golden eye

for me am a really nice guy

i'll get what i want its not written

not like pain marks after one is bitten

I'll live in harmony in my own piece

this is just my Masterpeace 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A good comparison and analogy about life...:)......................

[paras]

thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Khushi]

Just like an artist makes his choices we take decisions that shape r life. I like d part which says my life, my rules in a proper way..

[paras]

thanks alot am glad you like it :)

[Praveeta]

I liked the comparison between canvas and life. Canvas portrayed as life and by selecting the right colours (making right choices), the canvas reflects a beautiful picture which equates to blissful life.

[paras]

am glad you liked it .! thanks..!

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[ZeniaK]

The message behind this is my favorite part, that you said that you will live your own life because you can and because you want and no one will get in your way, which is what I absolutely loved about it. Keep it up and keep writing!

[paras]

am happy that you find it interesting . Thanks and i'll surely try to keep up.!!

[Bri]

I love this! Being an artist myself I can appreciate how you've captivated the feeling of making art and you've gone farther than that.
Well done, friend.

[paras]

well thanks and i must say an artist truly senses his colours.! :)

[Miles W.]

Very intriguing. Gives a sense of surrounding, and shows the fact that beauty can be found anywhere. Also, it does a great job explaining the idea of finding your own path and not just simply following the roads that life throws at you. Good poem.

[paras]

Thanks and am glad you find the message quite interesting.!! :)