foggy road

life is a journey and no road is long with company.Way to go

The journey i covered so far

like money collected in a jar

is not worthy if i lose now

if i decide to give up somehow

In my lifetime i learned a lesson

It was of those days i was a kid and ate melon

my well wisher - an angel told me 

i can be a hero

But also warned me its non-worthy

if i didn't gave effort

 coz everything multiplied by zero is zero

For how far i drove i came by myself

no thanks to others 

no need for bothers

its all my own route

I am the captain of my soul

I know whats coming to me, for me

i know what would it be

death or suffering, maybe

With confidence in me

and support of others be

Lies before the path in front

to cross or to stay is my option

choices are to be made

but you don't get to choose

that you have to make the choices wide awake

This way is harder for me

obstacles are coming but i cannot see

I have to move right away

carrying my confidence aboard

I have to anyway by myself

cross this 'Foggy Road'

Reviews

[Faceless Poet]

very nicely penned. Life is like a road, its a process to go through, to pass through, to ride the riddles along the way. Its passage to towards a better you in the end.

[paras]

thanks alot am glad you liked it :)

[Praveeta]

Nicely penned. I see confidence as your armour to get through the obstacles in life.

[paras]

well thanks and i must say somebody got an eye of eagle :D

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the compliment.

[Stanley King]

Such an excellent piece wrote with heart and soul. Excellent work. Bravo!!!

[paras]

am glad you liked it.!!

[Stanley King]

It's a true work of art and I look forward to reading more from you :-)

[paras]

i'll try my best to keep up :)

[MOON]

Poignant self affirming and asserting choice. Good write.

[paras]

thanks alot.!!:)

[Nour Al-Hajj]

It's beautiful. Nice work :)

[paras]

thanks alot .!! :)