hypothermic nightmare

Cold winter air
Locked in despair
Night quickly approaches
unseen horror slowly encroaches
Hypothermia sets in
fear slowly creeps from within
Bodily functions frozen solid
Vision completely blotted
White noise all around
no reprieve to the onslaught of sound
Screams of terror arise
Nonetheless its no surprise
Morning never seen again
Death slowly takes the win

Reviews

[Bear]

Bravo, nice rhyme sequence and your choice of rhyming words was good although (solid-blotted) was a bit of a stretch :) You told a whole story in only 56 words which proves what I always say: Poets says it in a lot less words!