go look in your closet

let's forget about it
just one second
let your body become..
numb
feel the words enter your veins and flow with your blood
don't worry too much man/woman
it's not about the journey it's about the destination
while you're numb, think about the flowers.
how beautiful they smell. think about it long and hard.
can you smell it? now think about that beer you had a couple nights ago. some find it hard to lay down and let it all go away.
why do we need a beverage of alcohol to allow us to do so.
im with you all the way. i too endulge in drinking. i lay down and think more thoughts than all the grains of sand of the most exquisite beach you can think of.
it's because we are scared. you are scared. i am scared.
scared of what? i believe it's our thoughts that frighten us. the thoughts you don't want to listen to when you are vunerable and might do something stupid. i dont know. but its how i feel.. ok?. i just want to take the time to write whats on my mind haha. I've found the most loving, beautiful, sexual babe on the planet. i for once can look at myself and see happiness. not because of her, but because i stood in the hallway full of chaos and decided to say enough is enough. i opened the doorway to an improved life. in the long run, its you. you make yourself happier more than anyone on the god forsaken rock we call home. so try it sometime. let the room take over your body, soul, mind. i pinky promise, you'll be okay ha. if not, just grab a gun and end it all. whatever floats your boat.
-Chrime

Reviews

[CMC]

This is very authentic, and I like how personal you become with this poem. There are loads of good and high points in there. I hope you continue to write more poems.