Reading the Signs Wrong

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Reading the Signs Wrong

 

With crushes, a girl’s life can be full of meaning,

That even an innocent act can change her everything,

Then she starts to think that the act means something,

Oh, girls, I know you’re familiar with this feeling.

 

On the way to school, he bumps at you and it’s his fault

And your heart starts doing its usual somersault,

You can’t help but think that it wasn’t just an accident,

So you write on your diary about this meaningful event.

 

He picks up the books that fell to the ground,

He mumbles a sorry, with your name he bound,

First words he said to you plays in a loop de loop,

Stuttering “thank you” while fighting urge to poop.

 

Carrying the books, he offers to walk you to class,

And when he learns you’re in the same, he tells you he’s an a*s.

Giggling, you spank him and tell him “it’s okay,”

Deep inside, you’re crumbling since he only learned that day.

 

Bored, he asks you about you in class,

You tell him you like pink ‘cause you are a lass.

The next day, he comes to school looking so pink,

Whole day, the shirt’s meaning is all that you think.

 

In Chemistry, the teacher announces each pair,

He said it’s a project so a table you’ll share.

And when it is announced that you are working with your crush,

You take it as God’s sign, so you start to blush.

 

Before you sleep, he texts you “Good night”

You clench your chest ‘cause it feels so tight,

You think for an hour on how to reply,

To a message he sent in just a blink of an eye.

 

The next week you see him again at that same spot,

An idea that he’s into you makes you think that you have a shot,

But then this time he bumps into another girl,

Déjà vu flashes but with an unexpected twirl.

Author's Note

Special shout-out to 13ReasonsWhy: This is GEORGIA! HAHA.

Anyway, I just wanted to write this so if you think it sucks, then just tell it to me straight. :)) I know this is not my best, but at least I enjoyed writing it. So I hope you'll also enjoy! :P

Reviews

[The Winter Grey]

While I can't comprehend your ongoing fascination with fecal matter :P but there are some very incredible points to this piece.

(1) The pink shirt. One of the truest, most touching tragedies of pre-relationship amblings.

(2) The text message... the fact that idle conversation for him has made your entire night... you captured that brilliantly.

(3) The utterly depressing (and spot-on accurate) ending.

Well done.

[Mary C]

Well expressed and reflective.

[natzky]

heheh' I really like bittersweet poems'...you did' great job in rhyming..double like....:)

[KT]

haha Great poem! We girls all get like this when there's that special guy, don't we? ;) I thought you did a really good job; I always admire people who can rhyme really well so...Excellent! Keep up the good work!! :D

[Dove]

Funny lol serious;y "while finding the urge to poop" haha thats brilliant. This by all means does not suck and I'm so glad you wrote this. By the way for some reason I like the font that you wrote the words it. I know I'm wierd but I'm just saying.

[SilentDreamer]

And I enjoyed reading it! Hilarious. It's not that often that you read something so funny. Nicely done.

[Hachamecha]

haha!
'while fighting the urge to poop'
it's cute:D I like it that's in a girl's pov

[emma]

wow. every word was accurate and real. i am so like that! i take the littlest things and make a huge deal out of them. this was really well done, you never failed to rhyme perfectly and it flowed nicely. loved it!

[13ReasonsWhy]

OH MY GOSH GEORGIA!!!! I WANT FONTS HERE!!!

i love it... i can totally relate to it like many girls can and the meaning is amazing... love the flow of words and the last sentence really left me wondering but satisfied... in all good write!!!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love it cuz it shows what a girl can think when a guys acts so sweet and it really makes a point to the guys... great write thanks for sharing