Measuring Love

Wrote this for a contest. The poem should have 4 lines and should rhyme. Anyway, this was fun to write. ;)

Measuring Love

Kiss me, touch me, love me, just please captivate me,

With that sweet smile of yours, I’ll be your one and only devotee.

I don’t give a damn if one day you’ll let me go and set our love free,

I’d still do anything for you, my love, even parting the red sea.

Author's Note

Wrote this in just a few minutes, but I still hope you like this. Just a light read with not much depth into it. HAHA =))

Awarded 'second' in the Four Lines. Make it Rhyme. Contest

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I love short poems and yours is extremely
lovable.
Perhaps your dedication to love is the
captivating essence. You leave no doubt
pf your intentions.
Great write, great loving, great talent.
Thanks for letting me read you--- it sounds
like a little read is it, all the rest belongs to
your love.

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Seshat Nidaba]

Your pleading tone is quite adorable, and in itself original and captivating. That's how I feel about someone...

[etxcp]

:) & ?

[Walk away slow poet]

Such a sweet poetic write, really enjoyed this write. Awesome!

[Dove]

Very nice, sweet, and romantic. Thats always a winner.

[Sarah]

so sweet. it is very short but very romantic

[13ReasonsWhy]

amazing! very descriptive and full of feeling. like your other pieces... wonderful.

[Tai Ryens]

Lovely poem, seems like a great start if you are planning to write another poem that goes a bit deeper. It's quite easy to understand, which makes it a great starter. Great job!