The Way You Make Me Feel

The Way You Make Me Feel

A Poem by paparapapa
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Purely descriptive poem of how he makes me feel... I think. Haha.

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The Way You Make Me Feel

 

Walking with my head held high,

Talking animatedly till I am bone dry.

But when I’m with you, I just try and try,

All that comes out - a frustrated, shy sigh.

 

Glares and stares, I can do them in a snap,

In my eyes, anyone feels like lost in a trap.

But when you look at me, it only takes a clap,

Averting my blue peepers under this white cap.

 

Jesting with me, I simply counterattacked,

Laughing so hard until my voice cracked.

But when it’s with you, I always get sidetracked

Cause you make it feel full - my urinary tract.

 

I used to hate the feeling of being in my school,

I just wished to sit whole day on my piano stool.

But when there were you, I banished this ground rule.

For all I want is to look at you and drool like a fool.

 

Before there were you, I retire early at night.

I didn’t have thoughts of turning feelings to a write.

But when you came along, everything just felt right,

Every piece of my mind, you haunt it like a mosquito bite.

 

© 2011 paparapapa


Author's Note

paparapapa
Totally random. I just described how he makes me feel, but with rhymes! HAHA. Well okay, I don't drool. =)) Enjoy and tell me what you think about it.

Awarded 'Good Love Poem ♥' in the Love Poems Contest.

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tk
such a sweet, innocent feel in this piece! :)
very funny and it made me remember those high school days. i used to feel like this before.. haha!
"Cause you make it feel full - my urinary tract."
"For all I want is to look at you and drool like a fool."
totally hilarious. and the rhyming scheme is awesome.
such a noteworthy write by a notable writer. keep it up.
thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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EMF
Ah. Teenage love. And thirties love and sixties love. It's all the same. When you meet someone and begin to fall we all feel like this. You have summed up a universal feeling perfectly. Superb job, and nicely handled.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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lol you don't drool but apparently he makes you want to pee? i like it it's cute. there were a couple lines that seem grammatically wrong though i'm not sure if that was on purpose or not >< good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Aww, i remember i wrote classic love poems for theguy i actually fell head over heels for, everyone who has read my more beginner writes would know the trauma i had because of falling for the guy that made me get all dressy for after school, how he made me feel so great when he just smiled at me :)
I hope it all goes well :) Great poem and I loved the font btw :)
Beth :3

Posted 13 Years Ago


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still lacks depth but you quite good with rhymes. it seems to you that rhyming is the essence of poetry

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Totally Random:yes Did I love it: Yes

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like it. It is very random but it still has a little feeling in it. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on November 14, 2011
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Tags: Love, Feelings, Emotions, Crush, Poetry

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