The Way You Make Me Feel

Purely descriptive poem of how he makes me feel... I think. Haha.

The Way You Make Me Feel

 

Walking with my head held high,

Talking animatedly till I am bone dry.

But when I’m with you, I just try and try,

All that comes out - a frustrated, shy sigh.

 

Glares and stares, I can do them in a snap,

In my eyes, anyone feels like lost in a trap.

But when you look at me, it only takes a clap,

Averting my blue peepers under this white cap.

 

Jesting with me, I simply counterattacked,

Laughing so hard until my voice cracked.

But when it’s with you, I always get sidetracked

Cause you make it feel full - my urinary tract.

 

I used to hate the feeling of being in my school,

I just wished to sit whole day on my piano stool.

But when there were you, I banished this ground rule.

For all I want is to look at you and drool like a fool.

 

Before there were you, I retire early at night.

I didn’t have thoughts of turning feelings to a write.

But when you came along, everything just felt right,

Every piece of my mind, you haunt it like a mosquito bite.

 

Author's Note

Totally random. I just described how he makes me feel, but with rhymes! HAHA. Well okay, I don't drool. =)) Enjoy and tell me what you think about it.

Awarded 'Good Love Poem ♥' in the Love Poems Contest.

Reviews

[tk]

such a sweet, innocent feel in this piece! :)
very funny and it made me remember those high school days. i used to feel like this before.. haha!
"Cause you make it feel full - my urinary tract."
"For all I want is to look at you and drool like a fool."
totally hilarious. and the rhyming scheme is awesome.
such a noteworthy write by a notable writer. keep it up.
thanks for sharing!

[Unknown]

you have amazing writing, i always love to read it.keep writing!

[misskaleido]

very beautiful! :DDDDD

[TheKaylaPup]

Honestly? I think you focused too much on the rhymes, and it actually takes away from the poem. I know, ryhmming is hard. I'm not trying to be mean, thats just how i feel about it.

[13ReasonsWhy]

Haha wow! Smiling as I read that. Amazing as all of your writing is!!

[kurdapiaful]

nice :)

[Calypso]

I have a boy like that. He's just as nerdy as me :)

[Alys Jackson]

This is an excellent poem. It makes the reader c**k there head and sigh. Love is the most magical thing earth owns and you have just written it word for word perfect.

[Black]

a beautifull poem,
it is so sweet,
it fits,
thank you for the beautifull poem

[Coyote Poetry]

School can test the best of spirit. Sometime need to pay attention to the people that matter. Leave the negative folks alone to figure what they need alone. Need darker letters for the old people. I did like the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shy Girl]

Random with flare... :) There is nothing better than having a fun time writing and you did just that here. I love the font, BTW :) Anywho, I loved your feelings and the funny tint you gave to each. Serious at first, then something to put a silly spin on in the end. Very sweet (no other word for it) :)