First Time

My first time to... Read it and take a guess! Don't cheat by looking at the Author's Note first. Haha. There are a lot of clues! :))

First Time

 

I closed my eyes,

I breathed three times.

Hands cold as ice,

I couldn’t hear the chimes.

 

I took one step,

Knees feeling weak.

Couldn’t help but peep,

Feeling like a freak.

 

I extended one arm,

Shaking like an old man.

I swear I mean no harm,

Just wanna hold your tan.

 

When our skin touched,

Cold crashed with colder.

I swear I could’ve dashed,

But this is grave matter.

 

Eyes scanned for silver,

My hand held it - careful.

I thought I was running fever,

As I slashed, slashed like a fool.

 

Lifeless eyes you had,

Felt them glare unto mine.

But I didn’t know I was that bad,

Till I saw them sparkle and shine.

 

That night I kneeled down,

I prayed like a bee.

Please give me a new gown,

And don’t let him visit me.

Author's Note

I know the poem sucks, but I really wanted to write this. :)) This is what I imagined my first time would be, but what really happened was far from it. It wasn't that scary. So the answer is... dissecting a cadaver! Did you guess right? :)) I really had fun writing this, but it was really hard. Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Don't ever think less of your writings. This is an incredible write you have here and the feel of it makes it almost ominous. The way you express it in such a way intrigues me. Dissecting a cadaver? Oh my! The feeling of doing such a thing is terrifying and takes a lot of nerves to do. Other than that, great poem from your part.

[Thea]

No way...This is great! Well, I guessed wrong...I've never thought of a cadaver, haha!
Nice poem...Really enjoying... :)))

[EylonBear]

it was good. like a mystery. I was thinking it would be your first time with a sexual interaction not dissecting a cadaver. they are scary though. the poem flows good as well. I like it.

[Larry Dyson]

well mine was a cat...in nursing school...and im afraid I got the scalpel part