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This is amazing. Truly.
One issue, and it's not even about you. On a website, http://www.runonwords.com, this book has been published. I would not know if you have given permission, but if you haven't, please check this out...: http://www.runonwords.com/penname/paparapapa
Please spread the word if you see any of your friend's writing on there.
No. No. No. No. No. Seriously girl, Scorned MUST GO ON!! -pumps up a fist- IT MUST! IT MUST! BECAUSE I CAN TELL YOUVE BEEEN WORKING SO HARD! Youve taught me to keep on going on with posting chapters, writing them- the works! Im kind of sad that its on hold, but I understand peiple do need a break from writing. Nonetheless,never stop the storu from staying alive. Scorned was one of the first books I have ever read when i first got my mitts on Writers Cafe, AND truly,( Im being honest) after I sneaked a peek into Scorned, the fishing pole dragged me into the book =] . Okay, Im sorry for pushimg you but its a free country and you can do whayever you want XD! I see theres poem magic in you so you can keep working on that professiom. But just for the mini fans in yoir closet, just dont gice up because trust me, I swear this js better than Twilight. ( Im sorry Im not a big fan of vamps) okay Ill stip typing on my Nook _< its making me spee,ll things womf and yeah :)
ON HOLD?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You don't think it's getting better? The moment you are in right now is one of the best throughout the whole book! Don't give up right now, keep trying, even when you have no inspiration, read stories, watch movies, get inspiration from there. I assure you, this book only got better by the chapter, keep writing it, keep working on it! :)
This is amazing. Truly.
One issue, and it's not even about you. On a website, http://www.runonwords.com, this book has been published. I would not know if you have given permission, but if you haven't, please check this out...: http://www.runonwords.com/penname/paparapapa
Please spread the word if you see any of your friend's writing on there.
If you would not be forgotten,
as soon as you are dead and rotten,
either write things worth reading,
or do things worth the writing.
- Benjamin Franklin
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