One Day Soon

One day i will leave

i will be spared from the missery of me

i will travel far

i will experince thoughts and feelings

i will become man

i will prove to myself

one day i will find myself

one day she will save me

but i do not hold my breath

the day she comes seems to be far

for now i will wait..

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Reviews

[Ashley]

Love, Misery is spelled with one s.
Experience is misspelled.

Its beautiful but no person in this world will ever save you. That's one thing that is soley your duty. No woman nor man holds that power.
And now I'm done preaching.
I love your writing darling :)

[Kameron Armitage]

I like it. The repition works well in setting th emood of the many thing that you ponder and are waiting for. Well done my dear friend, well done.

[mystic soul]

awesome... one line that really caught my attention was "one day i will find myself" the reason being sometime i too try to search in me for myself....everyone is waiting for something.. like you are waiting to be a man.. to find yourself........ good one...