College

Just a little poem about college :o

College

I thought college would be grade 13.

It's not.

Adulthood

Responsibility

Making the right choices.

This isn't high school

Coming late is no longer a tardy

But it's now an absence.

I am no longer treated as a child.

All of my choices still come with consequences.

Stricter ones.

I'm no longer a 14 year old freshman.

I'm an 18 year old freshman

And college

Is a whole nother thing.

Reviews

[Briana]

I really enjoy the conversational aspect of this one. The impression that someone is speaking out loud allows the reader to delve more naturally into the feelings behind this. The lines here don't feel as choppy to me as in "Internet", either. Well done.