A Lonely Heart's Desire

Darkness in my heart is all that's left in me 

Oh !!! my thee can you hear me ?

The cage of destiny made from the bars of society 

Locked my soul for which i pity

The mystics and the heavenly bodies i summon thee 

Tell me why i deserve this and where is the key

For the prison as i free myself and create my own fate
To bring in light in the demise of dark using myself as bait 

The battle continues in the endless time's history 

All i can do is wait till the time reveals its mystery  
    

Reviews

[Perception of light]

Your views on life and society are impressive,the poem is very awing I can feel the passion and the choice of juxtaposing words increase the intensity of the poem.
Very good poem.

[Pannagasamir Teragundi]

thank you , its really encouraging