You are my breath

You are the garden of flowers
The scent of the garden is from you
You are the moon of the sky
The moon light comes from you

The distance between us is sadness
My happiness is from you
When there is darkness all around
You are the light of my world

Your body is the grace of The Lord
My life comes from your soul
Your eyes shine like the Ocean
I see my world in your eyes

You are like the gorgeous twilight
Your heart is my abode
Your beauty is beyond comparison
You are the beauty of my soul

You are like an enchanting song
You're the melody of the birds
You are the shimmering morning star
You're the divinity of the gods
You are my eternal love

Reviews

[Dye]

"You are like an enchanting song
You're the melody of the birds
You are the shimmering morning star
You're the divinity of the gods
You are my eternal love"

What a great comparison for someone special. Who wouldn't want to be thought of that way. Very sweet.

[Pankaj Lohia]

thank you dye.. glad you liked it.. its awesome not just to be thought of that way but to be able to think of someone that way :)

[Dakshta]

Finally heavens doors open and a new poem by Pankaj came and Dakshta said it is good.. it is beautiful :)
written for someone special? :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

there is no one special left in my life :) .. its for love :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

and thanks dakshta for the review :)

[Dakshta]

no need to thank me, it's always a pleasure to read your poems :)

and I know it's not my place to say anything but.. well I don't think you should say that no one special is left.. I mean you have you.. what more special can someone have?