A Chuisle mo chroi

As the days turn into nights
I lay my head in despair
hoping against hope
I wonder
where have you gone
as my heart cries for you
my eyes seek your beauty
so sublime was the time
when our pulse ran together
our hand held each other
my love, my darling
the pulse of my heart !
with each passing moment
I can only hope to see you again
to hear you whisper softly
to feel the touch of your lips
I trust our love is true
my love, my sweetheart
the pulse of my heart !

Reviews

[Dakshta]

Again, I loved this poem :) Just one thing, never use multiple exclamation marks....they kind of ruin the whole line.....well apart from that as I said, I loved the poem :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

thank you for the tip.. i removed the exclamations :) .. and thanx for liking it. just to let u know, the title was inspired from the movie, a million dollar baby. :)