The story of Cinna

       Cinna was a beautiful little girl. She loved to play in the garden all day long at her cottage in Ireland. she was as sweet as an Irish girl could get. Her parents loved her very much and showered her with good morning hugs to goodnight kisses. most important, She was Daddy's little girl.
       Cinna Grew up too fast, her parents thought. Where did there little girl go? Cinna was now sixteen and  she was all too rebellious. If she was told to be home at a certain time she wouldn't listen. If she was told to do chores she wouldn't do them. Cinna had a boyfriend who was big but gentle. Her parents liked her boyfriend. Even more than Cinna at times.

       One day Cinna was walking through the garden when she spotted a squirrel sitting on the brick wall. She went up to it and looked at it for about a minute. Then she picked up a loose brick and beat its head in until it stopped twitching. She smiled and walked away, leaving the squirrel on the brick wall. The blood ran down the cracks onto the violets, staining the petals with violence and death.
       Cinna got worse and worse the older she got. She killed many small animals including birds and rabbits. Her parents always thought it was other animals causing the deaths of the many animals in the garden. Cinna would agree with them and leave it at that but Cinna's boyfriend knew better. He questioned her about the deaths. She remained stuck to the story her parents were using but her boyfriend still didn't believe it. Cinna was angry and scared. She didn't want her boyfriend to find out. She had to stop him.
      One night, Cinna left for her boyfriends house in the middle of the night.  She Looked through his window and found him fast asleep. She climbed through his window and went over to him. She took a rag and stuffed it deep into his mouth and tied his hands together. He woke up and saw Cinna above him. He was confused. Then Cinna took a rope and held it down against his neck. He panicked and struggled to get out of her grip but she was too strong at this point. Cinna pushed down harder until her boyfriend finally stopped breathing. She got up and smiled. She pulled makeup from the bag she brought and covered the marks on her boyfriends neck.
      The next day Cinna's parents rushed into her room. They cried and screamed and told Cinna what was going on. Cinna played along, trying hard not to smile. Her mother apologized for the loss and Cinna fake cried. She was afraid that her parents would find out.
      That night Cinna snuck into her parents room and watched them sleep for three hours. Then she went to the kitchen and got a knife. She went back into her parents room and cried. She felt bad. She had to stop but she had to do it. "I'm Sorry.", she said and she raised the knife above her mother and swung down. Cinna had Stabbed herself in the stomach. Now there would be peace in the world for her parents and the animals that came across the garden.
      Cinna died on the seventeenth of March in two thousand twelve. She killed herself at midnight exactly. She had just turned seventeen. She saved many people by killing herself.
      Cinna was a beautiful little girl.

Reviews

[Summer'sBreeze]

Wow, dark and chilling. I quite enjoyed this write but there were a few rough spots and grammer mistakes. Nothing a little re-read can't fix.
Other than that, great write!