girl

i dont really know what to call this

 

She is a fan of faces with a weakness for words. Her heart has its own agenda; she is a thinker out of tune. Her eyes are blue like jazz and as determined as the sun to rise and set on time.

 

She will save your life. She will let you in.

 

She’ll smile for you like a pet with a trick and laugh for you like a bird with a song.

 

She will love you because she won’t know what else to do.

Author's Note

can this stand alone?

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Try this and see what you think.

"Fan Of Faces"

She is
With a weakness for words.
Her heart has its own agenda; she is a thinker out of tune.
Her eyes are blue like jazz and as determined as the sun to rise and set on time.

She will save your life. She will let you in.

She'll smile for you like a pet with a trick and laugh for you like a bird with a
song.

She will love you because she won't know what else to do.

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I like your writing. Hope you don't mind me doing this to your poem.

Art

i like this one. i can understand where u are coming from. but not only girls have this type of personality. sometimes a male might have the same traits or act the same way. they just might know how to hide it a little bit better. but this is a very good poem.