Like a Dandelion

Like a Dandelion

A Poem by TIFFANY!
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This is about a girl who lost someone but she wants a second chance and her heart is broken. The story kind of jumps a little bit...She's at the beach and she feels like she's going to die. She sees a Dandelion...the dandelion relates to her life. T

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If only every second hand stopped

Clocks would stop ticking

If only pushing back hands could reverse reality

We’d all live life regret free

If only we were perfect

 

I escape to the only place that doesn’t demand perfection

My last destination

Hot ball of fire above, heats me with guilt

I scream towards the roaring waves of imperfection

“I’M SORRY!”

My heart ticking like a time bomb

This fragile heart never seems to give up

If only yours lasted forever

 

Like a diamond in the rough

A lonely dandelion remains strong

I watch as each seed floats away in the summer breeze

One by one every wish glistening in the sun

If only you gave a million chances

 

Like a dandelion  

 

 

© 2009 TIFFANY!


Author's Note

TIFFANY!
I'm really not that good at writing poems so give any tips for me to improve!
Advice would be nice to hear
Please comment/critique!

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HELLO. My name is Tiffany ; 15. I honestly know how to write, i learn it at school, i basically know the writing process, poem structures, English: no sweat. My poems on here are just for fun. .. more..

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