self harm

what happens during or after you self harm a shriek of pain or pleasure

slice, slash, slit, slaughter 

slice, slash, slit, slaughter

slice, slash, slit, slaughter

You slice, slash, slit and slaughter.

why?

A few more cuts then you slice and dice

A few more wounds then you  pierce and puncture 

stab, jab, poke, prick, clip, snip

slice, slash, slit, slaughter 

slice, slash, slit, slaughter

slice, slash, slit, slaughter

you scream and shout

whine and whimper

shriek and screech

 Take a deep breath and count to three

 then what?

Reviews

[shade]

Describes what many people go threw.sad but true how this world
Many people live.
I enjoyed the poem but didn't make me feel good at all thinking

[pams poems]

ohh I'm sorry I guess you ended up with the right feeling if you felt like that thank you

[Davidgeo]

Why'd you delete my review pam? It was relatively supportive.

You shouldn't let your ego let your anger drive your decision making.

If you can perceive the world from a neutral perspective things become much clearer.

[pams poems]

no no no , another writer blocked me on everything for no apparent reason and when i last checked they where the only 1 who commented on this poem so i just deleted everything them i t an email saying you commented then i realised my mistake in wasn't on purpose so i don't have an ego

[Davidgeo]

relax... I was just observing and messing with a little. You have every right to delete everything I say. I would never hold that against you.

[pams poems]

yh but it was an accident!

[pams poems]

i didnt even get to read what u put