Happy

Happy

A Poem by pams poems
"

what It's like when you have been sad for so long and you finally become happy again its a great feeling

"

oh my gosh 

its been so long,

its been so long since I felt this way

its been so long since I felt I could scream

 I can't believe I am truly happy.


Oh my gosh, its been so many years the times I've cried and screamed 

and now I can truly say I am happy.

 I could dance all day and laugh all night 

I am so happy I could jump the moon


It's is amazing  all those unhappy feelings

have gone they've vanished

It's just so wonderful

It's amazing and it's beautiful

 

and it's off because 1 am happy!

© 2016 pams poems


Author's Note

pams poems
I am feeling amazingly happy and I hope others finally feel this way just as I am feeling today

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Touched my soul and made me happy too! An excellent work but just take care at your writing syntax, like commas and capital letters, but it doesn't matters, just a opinion, it's a fabulous poem. You can just enhance it more by a good syntax. ( Just my opinion, doesn't matters). It's a cheerful poem, no doubt!
Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pams poems

9 Years Ago

well ill try I aint the best with commas etc but thx



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Touched my soul and made me happy too! An excellent work but just take care at your writing syntax, like commas and capital letters, but it doesn't matters, just a opinion, it's a fabulous poem. You can just enhance it more by a good syntax. ( Just my opinion, doesn't matters). It's a cheerful poem, no doubt!
Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pams poems

9 Years Ago

well ill try I aint the best with commas etc but thx

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Added on May 16, 2015
Last Updated on March 9, 2016
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pams poems
pams poems

london, United Kingdom



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hi I am pam I love reading, love writing poems and stories. love history and animes I am very athletic and a bit shy. going to be writing stories more..

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