Dead But Immortal To Tell

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the sky looked orange in the west

i blinked the tears and i hugged myself.

the feeling was deep for it hurt my heart

but i had to adjust with my broken heart

hard to believe, as i sat on a stone

feeling the pain, asking my soul

for what were my sins?

what was this din?

that broke and shattered me all.

i gazed upwards, could see darkness

slowly dimming the hopes below,

could see the migrating birds

flying towards their home, their happiness.

i looked and found no one

i fisted some grass as i sat on it

feeling the pain, asking my soul

for what were my sins?

what was this din?

that broke and shattered me all.

i knew there was purpose to shove me off

he have a new girl and chucked me off

i know he loved me somewhere deep within

but never he did come out with it.

the sky above got ink-blue

indicating me not to glue

on the place where i sat my last

and soothingly, the sky called me at last

i got up and knew i had no chance

no friend to stop no foe to dance

coming to the edge of the age-old cliff

i did not measure the depth by a mere look

but it was a fall thats just what all it took

i took an extra step from the edge, and

was flying freely until i heard a crash

and at that moment i breathed my last.

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[deeps]

the sky above got ink-blue
indicating me not to glue
on the place where i sat my last
and soothingly, the sky called me at last

i like this part here, wonderful imagery and description.
Amazing write, full of meaning and feelings.
Very well written write.