This Is Love

This Is Love

A Poem by pal11

i couldn't see the light
no matter where i go
i couldn't analyze
no matter how i think

i was so numb
no feeling inside out
i was so dumb
to not see there is love

you came in my life
and showed me the light
helped me to analyze
that this is love

we met at the golden beach
and i instantly felt
that love at first sight
is not work of only Juliet

oh, baby, you know
that i know
that this is love

i hope we could freeze this time
trapped in territory of your and mine
don't wanna see anything beyond this
this time is of 'our complete bliss'

hold my hand and show me around
the world of beauty and joy
promise me one thing that we'll
live together forever in 'our complete bliss'

because, oh, baby
you know, that i know
that this is love

© 2010 pal11


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i hope we could freeze this time
trapped in territory of your and mine
don't wanna see anything beyond this
this time is of 'our complete bliss'

I love these lines, this is so wonderful and lovely.
Very well written and expressed

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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pal11
pal11

Mumbai, India



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HI! :D I'm a 17 year old Indian writer. I'm studying Arts and will be done with my HSC thsis year. I want to opt for Psychology for BA. :) more..

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A Poem by pal11