The Sea

The Sea

A Poem by Britteny

Posed in front of your mirror

The morning sun shines in

It's just so hard to bring

]Myself to look at you through

This mirror glossed in sun light

Dim and hazy just as I am

About the actions that transpired

Last night hours ago just now

I wrap the sheet around me...

Not for the easy breeze blowing

From the chiffon curtians your open windows

But in precaution did it happen?

If so will you repremend me?

Though for now you're a static figure

Laying amoungst the rumpled silk sheets

They are heaped and a spot lies wrinkled

Did I? Did you? Your voice so smooth

Booming like thunder but

It isn't the gray storm? The sun has come up

A body drenched in it's comfort

At least temporarly for the moment

You're not my past flame or muse

For as the sea signifies rebirth

And an apperance of you

My dearhave for now

Captivated my thoughts

Through this morning light

And with your slow breath's

Ruffled hair as mine but if it was beautiful

What transpired last night why can't I remember

You're older than me there's a tinge of guilt

An expreanced hand I guess guided the way

did you know just hpw to caress

To make a meer guppie feel like a mermaid

Your not normaly my type but salt air stirs

A cunning shark king of the deep

Secduced me with his charm

And as I surpass the gray storm

With all its dark clouds and might

I completely submeres myself

In this sea your kingdom domain

© 2008 Britteny


Author's Note

Britteny
Please ignore my spelling and grammar thanks

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This is so wonderful, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow great poem the words took me away.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I like the gentle abstract way you handle the thoughts of your lover. thanks for sharing this. charly

Posted 15 Years Ago


I never pay attention to spelling or gramer. I'm a poet not an english teacher. Okay as for your poem I think it is very good. It tells a story in a wonderfull way. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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