Asian Influence

Asian Influence

A Poem by Britteny

That slant to your eye

Makes me want to try

To be closer to your side

These feelings I can't hide

But I am attracted to you

And your graceful culture true

Something about the unknown

Has decided to grow

Within my very mind

I like the challanging kind

Such as yourself tend to be

WHat is the word for one? We?

Jet black hair of the raven

Makes my very heart cave in

To a strange beauty hard to touch

I think I love you oh so very much

When you look this way

I forget the time of day

Lose all balance and poise

Drop my things and make noise

My asian man you make my mind run wild

Yet I feel bashful and shy like a child

Teach me your beauty teach me your grace

For all I want above all is to touch your face

© 2008 Britteny


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Britteny
Please ignore my spelling and grammar thanks!

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Loved the part "Jet black hair of the raven, Makes my very heart cave in"
great poem~!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Asians YAY!, who's asian say "i"

Posted 14 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Britteny
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