Ode to the Deep Voice

Ode to the Deep Voice

A Poem by Britteny

My ode to the deep voice

How do I have any choice?

But to do as you command

Submit to your demands

And be well under your spell

Get to know you very well

At night so late you come in

Through my headphones it's no sin

I love your opinionated gentleman tone

Deep into my brain you dig you hone

Ideas thoughts all flood my mind

If by chance you I meet be kind

You are my angel of nighttime talk

I am sensitive unlike the halk

Tell me whisper sweetly in my ear

In your low lilting voice you will be here

I write this to you oh mystry man

Trying to do the best I can

To love you over these waves

My passion could fill lakes even caves!

I am not a mere object of lust

Please pay attention to me

You hold my heart's fragel key

I write this ode to show

How far I am willing to go

To bridge the radio gap

And correct this mishap

Finally romance sets in

With Mister Jimbo Hanin

© 2008 Britteny


Author's Note

Britteny
Please ignore my spelling and grammar thanks!

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An lively piece of writing but an ode it is not An ode is a formally recognised poem written to strict rules

However I enjoyed your words I knw several couples who met on the net and finished up walking down the aisle. One must be very carefuls it is easy to adopt a different persona from the truth

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2008

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Britteny
Britteny

never ending winter and snow....middle of blizzard nowwhere, OH



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My name is Britteny I am 35 years wise. I have been a member of Writer's Cafe for somewhere around 17 odd years now. I am occasionally create new pieces or get around to entering some scribbles from .. more..

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