I Want You

I Want You

A Poem by Britteny

I want you

Not in the way you think I do

I want your mind

Not a thought left behind

Tell me what you're thinking

Let me get into your brain's inking

Loosen your lips

Vital words drip

Move your arms and hands

These things I understand

I want to have an affair

Yes I do dare!

One with your being

And one with your mind now free

© 2008 Britteny


Author's Note

Britteny
Please ignore my spelling and grammar thanks!

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This is a amazing poems.
I really liked it, Flowed nicely and you got the rythming down! x3



Posted 16 Years Ago


very nice poem and i have to say the poem layout was perfict i did injoy reading this good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 20, 2008

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Britteny
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