The Final Act

                            The Final Act

screeching tires, shattering glass, twisted metal, fibarglass. the scene is set, it all goes black, and so we're in my final act.

 

the pain i  feel, the smell of blood, while tearing eyes begin to flood. i hear some screams now that is that and now we're in my final act.

 

oh my god! what did i do? because of me our lives are through. like a gun being shot, like our lives we have not.

 

screeching tires, shattering glass, twisted metal, fibarglass. the scene is set it all goes black, welcome to my final act.

 

driftin off into the sea, my door is locked without a key. can you see my misery in my final act.

 

we will all have to face the facts, life is not drawn on a map. this map would be easily burnt but unlike life could be returned...

 

like screeching tires, shattering glass, twisted metal, fibarglass. the scene is set, it all goes black, and so we end my final act.

Reviews

[Matt Stephens]

Fantastic, I'm glad I got around to reading this.

[Wolfwind Words]

A wonderful song invoking many images! I could feel the emotional ups and downs as the lines went by.

Great Job!
Infinity's Shadow

[Mr. Lopez]

Very nice work . I could almost hear the drums in the background.

[ac31595]

nice i remember u singing it! u should of won if there even was a winner! so......u need to sing and write more songs you are very good at it and i hope u have more when you go somewhere to get on a computer because i love your stories!

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

it sounds even better when you sing it!!!! but it is still romantic in a iknowwhat'sgoingtohappen,we'regoingtodie romeo and juliet way...you always know what to say...i like that about yooh!!;)

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

awww Shelbie! I love that SONG!!!! So sad though. You know you should have been the KBMS Idol winner!

[CJ]

i love this!!!! it is very good and sad but i really got a meaning out of it. great write....keep writing