All they needed was there

All they needed was there

A Poem by Paige
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Three poems in one, just bold, just italics, and then both! The underlined lines are for both parts.

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Lucky girl

Unfortunate boy

She'd dream all day

He'd fight the night

of things to come

While uncertian of

Circumstances, obstacles, 

The future

Excited Her

It Frightened Him

AND THEN THEY MET

She found adventure as

He found a place as

She held onto his hand while

He held onto her hand while

He smiled at her and

She smiled at him and

ALL THEY NEEDED WAS THERE

 

© 2012 Paige


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This was an iteresting poem to read. Very good writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this write, kind of intriguing
Nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It almost makes the reader believe that there's always someone to complete the missing parts that you see in yourself. A very good attempt at seeing the positives through the negative and finding the overall balance. Well done, post some more stuff!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the different perspectives in this! Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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