Bite Me, Please...

Bite Me, Please...

A Poem by K. Carver
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Ha. Vampire rant.

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sometimes my love for you can not be described in words

but only by the way you look at me

 

your eyes are like deep pools of blood

ready to be extracted from my heart

 

everytime i look at you my heart skips

and i hold my breath...waiting...

 

 

 

 

© 2009 K. Carver


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This one is so awesome
I really like this one alot.

Posted 15 Years Ago
very cool piece ... nice flow and imagery in this .... overall nice job on this... fav lines....your eyes are like deep pools of blood

ready to be extracted from my heart


Posted 15 Years Ago
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Amy
I agree!
I feel like this all the time!
Nicely written! x

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on November 20, 2008
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