Be With Me Forever?

Be With Me Forever?

A Poem by K. Carver
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A relationship before he is bitten turns into one under the struggle of decision. Vampire rant.

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When I look into your eyes

I see nothing

 

When I step into your soul

All I see is darkness

 

Your heart is no longer beating

Your lungs have stopped moving

 

your lust is no longer for love

but, for blood

 

you can no longer feel

but i look in your direction

 

all i need from you is protection

you want to let me in

 

yet it always feels like the end

and all i can think of to say

 

is

change me

© 2009 K. Carver


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reminds me of twilight.

I like it

xxx

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Amy
WOW!
This is breathtaking!
I love all of the emotion you used!
Nicely written! x

Posted 16 Years Ago



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A Poem by K. Carver