I Can't Repair This One...

I Can't Repair This One...

A Poem by K. Carver
"

When they feel the joy of killing you, yes, that's when it hurts the most.

"

im sitting here...

with you infront of me...

bleeding to death...

and you just watching...

i notice your expression...

your smiling...

we both know why...

we need know explanation...

 

you ripped my heart out...

and your holding it in your hand...

© 2009 K. Carver


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i think that you went really deep with this one... it think that it may be from the loss of a boyfiend/girlfriend but i see that you write alot about this subject and although your poems are great i think it would be nice to see something from a DIFFERENT topic!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


oops i didnt really review it. i liked it it wuz really good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


thats terrible!!! y would they rip ur heart out? is this based off u real life?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 10, 2008
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K. Carver
K. Carver

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Yes. Well. Not much to tell, so not much to read. I write poems, mostly. I'm breathing with life. I don't believe that I'm quite successful at either. I do ask one request of anyone who may read this:.. more..

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A Poem by K. Carver