You Melt Me

You Melt Me

A Poem by K. Carver
"

Hmm.

"

when you look at me

im like a snowman

on a hot summer's day

i melt away

 

theres no stopping it

your eyes are ever so hot

you just stare

and your eyes tease me

 

i stand here

dripping into a puddle

as you stare at me

with those hot, hazel eyes

© 2009 K. Carver


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uh y hazel!? y not blue, brown, gray,green?! jk! i loved it like all the others.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A lovely crafted poem about the heavenly gaze of a loved one....

What came to mind..."Oh no! I melted her, does anyone have a shop vac?!"

Cute and heartfelt piece!
Infinity's Shadow


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 2, 2008
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K. Carver
K. Carver

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A Poem by K. Carver