The Effect

The Effect

A Poem by K. Carver
"

Love you can't have but you don't want to share.

"


 

when he passes me

he makes me sway

i almost fall

but then i catch myself

 

he looks me in the eyes

to tell me i am beautiful

but then my heart sinks

with the thought of him saying it to someone else

 

my heart is in a million peices

with the thought of another

looking at him

the way i so dearly did

© 2009 K. Carver


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To think of someone you love touching another can make you feel like you are dying inside. Only time heals the thoughts, the memories always stay. I could feel your pain of losing a love that you once cherished. You expressed yourself well here.

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Added on March 12, 2008
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K. Carver
K. Carver

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Yes. Well. Not much to tell, so not much to read. I write poems, mostly. I'm breathing with life. I don't believe that I'm quite successful at either. I do ask one request of anyone who may read this:.. more..

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A Poem by K. Carver