Thoughts

Even when I sleep,

I'm not really sleeping.

When I wake up in the morning,

I remember all the thoughts that were racing through my mind. 

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

An unsettling thought on thoughts--and, of course, sleep.
Succinctly put.
Sorry, tayla, that you're not currently getting enough restful sleep. It is your subconscious you must quiet--not always an easy task.
I very much like this little offering; your "story" is well-expressed and thought-provoking.
I wish you soon-arriving peace, tayla.

[MoriartyMesa]

Short, free flowing and more importantly, honest for the reader to think and remember.


Nice Job

[Kyle]

Unfortunately...I can relate to this. I dont always sleep well. Those thoughts...i cant certainly understand.

[J Todd Underhill]

Ah tis my own personal ballad you have written here. You are not alone, I keep my writing space right near my bedroom because I want as little space between my dreams and writing as possible. You have penned magic here.