Yesterday's Dreams

Yesterday's Dreams

A Poem by Lisasview
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Richard wonderful "Nabla Del" form inspired me to try it. Calling my version Nabla Del Free Style.

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© 2024 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would really appreciate knowing your thoughts.Thank you,
Lisa
The abstract acrylic painting was painted by me....

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A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

3 Weeks Ago

Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From findi.. read more



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Exceptional in absolutely every way! To create that form and enclose meaningful words within it is mindblowing - (especially for me - can barely parenthesize a colon! ) As for the painting, the more I looked at the more I wanted to. Many thank yous for sharing, Lisa.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Week Ago

Yes, this was definitely a very difficult poem to write...I keep thinking I should try it again?? Al.. read more
emmajoygreen

1 Week Ago

NOOOO, I didn't know you painted the abstract! What a creatve woman you are! Is well I don't envy .. read more
These syllable count poems do make for an attractive pattern and i love them myself .
The patience required to get both shape, content and count is a credit to you Lisa...
Well done ☺

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Weeks Ago

Yes, not easy... But I did enjoy the challenge.
Thank you Stella for reading and reviewing..... read more
LOVE YOUR ART Lisa, the colors are my favorite!!!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Week Ago

Good to hear...
Are you on Instagram?
Lisa
Betty Hermelee

1 Week Ago

NO, but you can message me anytime!
Lisasview

1 Week Ago

I will… wanted to share photos of my hand wired necklaces that I have been selling… not sure if .. read more
Beautiful form in this piece, Lisa...it looks so perfect and the dream is lovely....What is he name of his style??? you did a masterful job...so much love is oozing out of this delicious poem...you are quite talented!
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much Betty.
The style, which I did mention under the title (didn't it show up on.. read more
dearest Lisa... the silky clouds of yesterdays Dreams become the Harp that Angels Play. Amen, Pat

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

3 Weeks Ago

Such a sweet review of my poem dearest Pat!
Thank you,
Lisa
A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

3 Weeks Ago

Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From findi.. read more
A genuine difficulty in pattern poetry is finding a way form the form to enhance the words. Your final line accomplishes that goal.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

3 Weeks Ago

Good morning
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my very first try with Nabla Del….. read more

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Added on October 22, 2024
Last Updated on October 26, 2024

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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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