Yesterday's Dreams

Richard wonderful "Nabla Del" form inspired me to try it. Calling my version Nabla Del Free Style.

Author's Note

If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would really appreciate knowing your thoughts.Thank you,
Lisa
The abstract acrylic painting was painted by me....

Reviews

[Soren]

A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe

[Lisasview]

Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From finding just the right words to convey my thoughts to making everything line up just right...Yikes!!!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work.
Lisa

[Lorry]

Very nice indeed. I like this and sm impressed by the visuals as well as the sense of it all too.
It somehow reminds me of playing trivial pursuits but I don't even remember there being a lilac or lavender wedge!
😃

[Lisasview]

It drove me nuts lining up everything perfectly...the poem was easy to write...thank you,
Lisa

[Lisasview]

Did you know that the painting is one of my works?

[Lorry]

I didn't. Very nice though. It would look great being the only splash of colour in a white room.

[Lisasview]

I sold it right away… they sent me a photo and the paint is on a white wall

[Neville]

.................. Perfectly executed .. and as pretty as a picture of itself .. Neville still rushing here and there & everywhere

[Lisasview]

Great to see you back. The abstract in acrylics is one of mine.💕
Another busy day but I do like being busy.

[Levi Levin]

Very true indeed. You painted a great picture about this. Truly we feel this way at times. Great work Lisa!

[Lisasview]

So nice to hear from you Levi.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my latest poem.read moreSo nice to hear from you Levi.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my latest poem.
Really appreciate it.
Lisa

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome.

[emmajoygreen]

Exceptional in absolutely every way! To create that form and enclose meaningful words within it is mindblowing - (especially for me - can barely parenthesize a colon! ) As for the painting, the more I looked at the more I wanted to. Many thank yous for sharing, Lisa.

[Lisasview]

Yes, this was definitely a very difficult poem to write...I keep thinking I should try it again?? Also did you know that I painted the abstract?
Thank you always for reading and reviewing my work dear Emma..
Lisa, pouring rain today and I love it...

[emmajoygreen]

NOOOO, I didn't know you painted the abstract! What a creatve woman you are! Is well I don't envy you .. much! Rain can be one of those blessed events in life but for some places, as with in Spain recently, can be hell. Take care, oh wondrous all-rounder!

[Stella Armour]

These syllable count poems do make for an attractive pattern and i love them myself .
The patience required to get both shape, content and count is a credit to you Lisa...
Well done ☺

[Lisasview]

Yes, not easy... But I did enjoy the challenge.
Thank you Stella for reading and reviewing...
Lisasview

[Betty Hermelee]

LOVE YOUR ART Lisa, the colors are my favorite!!!

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Betty... Back into the hospital on November 28th for more manipulation!! Yikes...
L

[Betty Hermelee]

so sorry, get well soon🌷

[Lisasview]

Oh I feel fine... Just really want my knee to bend farther...
How are you doing?
L

[Betty Hermelee]

coming along, wiring on external rotation of my shoulder🙏ouch!

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh...sounds so painful!

[Betty Hermelee]

Getting better🌷

[Lisasview]

Good to hear...
Are you on Instagram?
Lisa

[Betty Hermelee]

NO, but you can message me anytime!

[Lisasview]

I will… wanted to share photos of my hand wired necklaces that I have been selling… not sure if I can send photos on messages?
Lisa

[Betty Hermelee]

Beautiful form in this piece, Lisa...it looks so perfect and the dream is lovely....What is he name of his style??? you did a masterful job...so much love is oozing out of this delicious poem...you are quite talented!
Warmly, B

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Betty.
The style, which I did mention under the title (didn't it show up on your end?? is called Nabla Del.
I sold that piece quickly... painting a lot for shows coming up. That one is an acrylic... I usually paint with watercolours.
Thank you again,
Lisa

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Lisa... the silky clouds of yesterdays Dreams become the Harp that Angels Play. Amen, Pat

[Lisasview]

Such a sweet review of my poem dearest Pat!
Thank you,
Lisa

[W. Barrett Munn]

A genuine difficulty in pattern poetry is finding a way form the form to enhance the words. Your final line accomplishes that goal.

[Lisasview]

Good morning
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my very first try with Nabla Del…took forever … not easy… decided to use one of my abstract acrylic paintings for the image.🎨