If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would really appreciate knowing your thoughts.Thank you,
Lisa
The abstract acrylic painting was painted by me....
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A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Weeks Ago
Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From findi.. read moreOh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From finding just the right words to convey my thoughts to making everything line up just right...Yikes!!!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work.
Lisa
Exceptional in absolutely every way! To create that form and enclose meaningful words within it is mindblowing - (especially for me - can barely parenthesize a colon! ) As for the painting, the more I looked at the more I wanted to. Many thank yous for sharing, Lisa.
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Week Ago
Yes, this was definitely a very difficult poem to write...I keep thinking I should try it again?? Al.. read moreYes, this was definitely a very difficult poem to write...I keep thinking I should try it again?? Also did you know that I painted the abstract?
Thank you always for reading and reviewing my work dear Emma..
Lisa, pouring rain today and I love it...
1 Week Ago
NOOOO, I didn't know you painted the abstract! What a creatve woman you are! Is well I don't envy .. read moreNOOOO, I didn't know you painted the abstract! What a creatve woman you are! Is well I don't envy you .. much! Rain can be one of those blessed events in life but for some places, as with in Spain recently, can be hell. Take care, oh wondrous all-rounder!
These syllable count poems do make for an attractive pattern and i love them myself .
The patience required to get both shape, content and count is a credit to you Lisa...
Well done ☺
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Weeks Ago
Yes, not easy... But I did enjoy the challenge.
Thank you Stella for reading and reviewing..... read moreYes, not easy... But I did enjoy the challenge.
Thank you Stella for reading and reviewing...
Lisasview
Thank you so much Betty... Back into the hospital on November 28th for more manipulation!! Yikes...<.. read moreThank you so much Betty... Back into the hospital on November 28th for more manipulation!! Yikes...
L
2 Weeks Ago
so sorry, get well soon🌷
2 Weeks Ago
Oh I feel fine... Just really want my knee to bend farther...
How are you doing?
L
2 Weeks Ago
coming along, wiring on external rotation of my shoulder🙏ouch!
I will… wanted to share photos of my hand wired necklaces that I have been selling… not sure if .. read moreI will… wanted to share photos of my hand wired necklaces that I have been selling… not sure if I can send photos on messages?
Lisa
Beautiful form in this piece, Lisa...it looks so perfect and the dream is lovely....What is he name of his style??? you did a masterful job...so much love is oozing out of this delicious poem...you are quite talented!
Warmly, B
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Weeks Ago
Thank you so much Betty.
The style, which I did mention under the title (didn't it show up on.. read moreThank you so much Betty.
The style, which I did mention under the title (didn't it show up on your end?? is called Nabla Del.
I sold that piece quickly... painting a lot for shows coming up. That one is an acrylic... I usually paint with watercolours.
Thank you again,
Lisa
A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Weeks Ago
Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From findi.. read moreOh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From finding just the right words to convey my thoughts to making everything line up just right...Yikes!!!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work.
Lisa
A genuine difficulty in pattern poetry is finding a way form the form to enhance the words. Your final line accomplishes that goal.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Weeks Ago
Good morning
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my very first try with Nabla Del….. read moreGood morning
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my very first try with Nabla Del…took forever … not easy… decided to use one of my abstract acrylic paintings for the image.🎨
I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years!
I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not..
So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..