Yesterday's Dreams

Yesterday's Dreams

A Poem by Lisasview
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Richard wonderful "Nabla Del" form inspired me to try it. Calling my version Nabla Del Free Style.

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© 2024 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would really appreciate knowing your thoughts.Thank you,
Lisa
The abstract acrylic painting was painted by me....

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A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

5 Days Ago

Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From findi.. read more



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LOVE YOUR ART Lisa, the colors are my favorite!!!

Posted 2 Days Ago


Beautiful form in this piece, Lisa...it looks so perfect and the dream is lovely....What is he name of his style??? you did a masterful job...so much love is oozing out of this delicious poem...you are quite talented!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Day Ago

Thank you so much Betty.
The style, which I did mention under the title (didn't it show up on.. read more
dearest Lisa... the silky clouds of yesterdays Dreams become the Harp that Angels Play. Amen, Pat

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

5 Days Ago

Such a sweet review of my poem dearest Pat!
Thank you,
Lisa
A form of poetry I have not mastered and for which I have the highest respect. I can not for the life of me understand the amount of effort that must go into writing such a work of art. It seems that multitasking is necessary to be able to end the poem in the proper space. Lovely and I stand in awe

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

5 Days Ago

Oh, you are so correct this was quite a challenge and I certainly have not mastered it... From findi.. read more
A genuine difficulty in pattern poetry is finding a way form the form to enhance the words. Your final line accomplishes that goal.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

6 Days Ago

Good morning
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my very first try with Nabla Del….. read more

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Added on October 22, 2024
Last Updated on October 26, 2024

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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years! I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not.. So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..

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