Hurried Steps

Hurried Steps

A Poem by Lisasview
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As we venture through life we can only hope that we find love that lasts...

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Hurried Steps


Life's winding vines cling to hurried steps,

as our story unfolds into those

cherished moments shared,

behind closed doors.


Kisses whisper stories we've longed for,

memories still embracing us

… warm and tender.


Treasured pieces we've woven together,

lives filled by yesterday's dreams

finding love where we left it …

in eagerly entwined hands,

holding hearts afloat.


Notions beckon us resume vibrant adventures,

skipping thru hot forests' shining miracles; 

endless paths cross, zigzagging thru life,

never yet reaching their ends.


Passions play tender symphonies,

only our souls can hear …

forever together.


·-~·🎼·~-·

© 2024 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you happen to pause at my writing I would so appreciate a review.
I always review everything I read.
Thank you,
Lisa

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awwww such a happy romance of the memories, mind and big hearts .. the reading for me is simply wonderful ... especially love the
"Notions beckon us resume vibrant adventures,
skipping thru hot forests' shining miracles;" ... never too old says i! ;) this one is to be read every now and then ... just as a reminder .. blessing on ya Lisa!
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Month Ago

Delighted you enjoyed the read.
You are so right.
We all need to remember what really .. read more



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Wonderfully appropriate painting for a start.. a perfect lure. Great find. As to your words - you lay chapters before your readers even though far shorter but.. you have the skill of using words as if they were starved of appreciation and must be fed, and - that you do by sharing such a true and yet magic relationship, words warm, words passionate. Even more: precious. Many, many thank yous.

Posted 1 Month Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

I love doing research!

Zoher Husain Shafique
Dubai, United Arab Emirates �.. read more
Lisasview

1 Month Ago

You are my brilliant friend!!!
I am going to add that info to my poem…
Thank you so .. read more
emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

Discovering is one of my hobbies! One day will discover how to make poetry!
souls and hearts forever together, bodies having to part...I have lived this poem...the memories cherished forever.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lisasview

1 Month Ago

Oh my… living my poem is fabulous!!!
Means so much to me…
Thank you,
Lisa

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Added on October 7, 2024
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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years! I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not.. So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..

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