Beach Days

Love poem

Beach Days

Where gentle sea breezes blow,

caressing shores …

our sun-kissed bodies, radiant

against deep cerulean skies.

Private thoughts whispered …

lying on golden, sparkling sand,

holding hands ~ fingers entwined

we remember …

squinting in warm, bright light,

as frothy, windblown waves

playfully roll in-n-out.

Tender touches …

igniting old known passions,

only found echoed in our memories.

Watching life dance 'round us,

knowing we'll return …

sharing treasures

of our love.

~~~🥀~~~

Author's Note

I took this photo of a painting in a hotel in Maui...

Reviews

[Gee]

I love Jacob's comment:)
A beautiful poem from a mind that has long since seen the first flushes of love but knows love oh so well.
Good morning Lisa

[Lisasview]

Hi Gee,
Yes, absolutely true. Thank you,
Lisa

[John the Baptist]

A nice love poem here, bordering on the erotic. It makes us experience the sensations of the lovers. It makes us all want to experience such days.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much John for reading and reviewing. O am delighted that you enjoyed my poem...
Lisa

[Soren]

Very romantic with an almost surreal feel. It is misty and dream like. Lovely Lisa

[Lisasview]

Wonderful insightful review...Thank you so very much,
Lisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

So peaceful, so calming...I wanted to hold hands with the poem.
j.

[Lisasview]

Great thoughts about my poem dearest Jacob..
Thank you,
Lisa

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow, how do you know California dreaming, love how bring words together , you're a good write but sometimes you touch my heart because I read your work but nevertheless what you don't understand I comment but you always blow my mind,I respect you because I will.never be the poet you are but it never fails your words touch heart's hell it touch me and there many you enjoy but I'm in California and you're in.England,.
But as far you are you're very kind kind in what you write, lol I live by the Coast, lol we have but sand.and waves. Thank you sharing

[Lisasview]

Thank you for your wonderful review. I am from Southern California-Santa Barbara on the beach…
read moreThank you for your wonderful review. I am from Southern California-Santa Barbara on the beach…
Moved to Spain 4 years ago.
Where do you live?
Lisa

[Mauricio Montoya]

Oh s@&t, I'm from San Yisidro , love the poem because where I'm from the are beaches , but you have style its like the imagery as I read woke me up. Hey good write got my attention.

[Lisasview]

Delighted you enjoyed it.
Thank you

[Mauricio Montoya]

Cool beans take care.

[Sami Khalil]

A good place to enjoy the water tides and the waves of passionate love; picture perfect and painting.

[Lisasview]

Hi Sami,
I am so happy to be back reading, reviewing and posting!!!
Sounds like you enjoyed my poem...
Lisa

[Sami Khalil]

Much joy and fun. You are welcome Lisa of Spain.

[emmajoygreen]

A wonderfully alive painting, plus a mood that's as deep and beautiful as your words. You have a way of talking passion and affection hip to hip.. reality of how it can amd should be to last a lifetime. Perhaps?
May I share the shadows and memories it leaves behind, please, Lisa.

[Lisasview]

Of course dearest Emmajoy...
I went crazy and posted 3 new poems...Now I have two more...so perhaps I will post those in the next few days.
I am so happy that you like my poetry ...makes me happy!!
Thank you,
Lisa

[emmajoygreen]

:))))))))))) + more

[Lisasview]

so sweet....