Golden Moments

Rhyming Couplets in 10-Count

Golden Moments

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Silky waves caress morning’s breezy shore;

we often lingered there long moments more.  

Those sensual days we will surely miss,

recalling our memory’s midnight bliss.

Bright marigold sun poured glimmering light,

 glistening o’er us as we held on tight.

we stopped….

to kiss. 

Pulling now closer to touch and to feel …

our love, no longer needing to conceal.

Awakening each others’ deep desire,

knowing nothing else would this e’er require.

Your sweet head upon my naked shoulder,

pondering our lives as we grow older.

 Wet, salty droplets like stars on your face,

formed silky, heavenly glittering lace.

Our love's devotion, through those many days,

allowed golden moments to stay ablaze!

 We embraced in our  yearning warmth ~ all night,

’til dawn’s glowing sun shined its vibrant might.

Author's Note

If you happen to drop by and read my poem I would so appreciate a review.
I always review everything I read.
Lisa

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'
Wet, salty droplets like stars on your face,
formed silky, heavenly glittering lace.

Our love's devotion, through those many days,
allowed golden moments to stay ablaze!'

Love laid on the page with real emotion, line by line start to finish,,

[Lisasview]

Glad you liked it Emma...
Thank you for the kind review,
Lisa

[Red Brick Keshner]

Bright, crisp, shiny: golden moments that shall sparkle for years and years!

[berenongur]

You make your feelings and thoughts felt so beautifully in your poems. I feel like you are forcing this heart of mine that is suffering from love pain to love again. You are about to make me fall in love again. Your words flow in a very natural way, as if you stopped there for a moment and said these things while looking into the eyes of the person in front of you.

[Lisasview]

I absolutely adore the fact that you were again moved by my poem ... You really understand my poetry very very well...
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Appreciated,
Lisasview, now in Spain

[Red Brick Keshner]

Wow! Warm and vibrant, marigolds are among my favourite blooms 🌸 and they just fit in perfectly with this golden poem!

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
So nice to hear from you my friend.
I have not been writing much for over a year. First I broke my clavicle, then 3 ribs all last year... so no use of my right side and I am right handed. Then on Jan. 3,
I got a new knee.
Lisa

[Red Brick Keshner]

Oh no. Hope your pain management and recovery have gone well.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so so much,
Lisa

[Lisasview]

Me again many many months later... I accidentally posted my poem so many months ago and you reviewed it... However it really wasn't finished but now it is... If you have the time to read it.
Lisa

[Red Brick Keshner]

Will most certainly do!

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much,
Lisa

[Betty Hermelee]

A beautiful poetic retrospective of a couple’s love for each other over time; remembering their younger days when they were fancy free to be full of life and sensuality….i love the vivid images of the morning scene with the sun reflecting off their faces; the morning breeze and the ripples of the sea…….fine write Lisa, the rhyming et al….
Warmly
B.

[Lisasview]

You are always so kind dear Betty...
Thank you so much for your lovely review.
Lisaread moreYou are always so kind dear Betty...
Thank you so much for your lovely review.
Lisa

[Patricia Wedel]

The Golden Oldies were sung when we were young and passion played through the Night into the Morning Light. Burning desires with Embers Heat. Lovers sleep. softly, Pat

[Lisasview]

That is so true dear Pat... we were lucky to be around at that time...
Lisa